a man called Wladek Splitman was living in the middle of a war.At the top, the german were separated from the jews.They gave to them the worst part of Varsovia, and then they started to die, to steal, and the german to kill them.At the first time the jews were 500.000, and after few time they were 60.000.Then the russians threw a bomb in Varsovia, all died.After few days, Wladek find a german soldier that survive to the bomb.The soldier help Wladek to live, finaly russians save Wladek and killed all german soldiers that survive
good job, but at the end you forgot to write the verbs in past tense.
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